First Steps: Part 1
Authors Note: This fiction was primarily inspired by the episode Palms of Glory, though it quickly veers off onto an alternate path. It has, as well, been influenced by countless wonderful works of...
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Just in time, Lynn! I was gonna come looking for you if you didn't post soon. Welcome and congrats on posting your first story here. I love it already and I'll be looking for part two soon.
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No! Wait this can't be the whole post. There must be more! I'm desperately looking for more! What an excellent start. I don't care where you got your ideas, they are wonderful as is your description...
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Wonderful start to your first story, Lynn! Can't wait for more!!!
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We need more! that's not nearly enough!! Great job!! Please hurry back with more!! And why do I think Linda had something to do with this? Go Linda. Get her to post more!! Christy
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Welcome, Lynn!! Off to a blazing start, for sure!!!!!! Nothing like jumping in with both feet, Ma'am! Waiting anxiously for more...!
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Lynn, this is an excellent start! Lots of detail (which is my favorite) and a new twist to one of my favorite episodes. Looking forward to where you are going to take this.Let's hope you post Chapter...
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Wow, your first story. You can't end this story yet. I can't wait for Part 2 soon.
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The first post!Good for you and Great for us!I agree with everyone else...ya give us a little more...okay we would be happiest with alot more! Come back real soon!Jan
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I'm going to echo the others, this was a wonderful start. I loved his inner thoughts:You put together a very touching story. Even as he stalked out, he realized his error. Of course they would feel...
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WOW.....what a fantastic start!! I love stories involving Heath's arrival in the family and this promises to be a good one, I especially enjoyed 'listening' to his thoughts!! I really can't wait for...
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Let me add to the kudos--It's hard to believe that this is your first attempt at fanfic--you write very well. Characters are true, and development of story is strong. I am enjoying reading your...
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